Overview 4

I have got to the point in my story were both seperate groups are becoming more serious about the opposing revolution.Kids in sign of desesperation are joinin to Jack's side leaving Ralph and "porky" alone on the bright side.As Jack takes advantage of the situation, Ralp looses power and control over things.I think this could probably be the worst thing to do in a scene like this because,union makes force and order,and if beeing abandoned in a lonely island is bad, what can possibly happen with kids ftting and savagely discusing over nothng? I believe things will start to get out of order an push the kids to EXTREME limits.