Tuesday, February 11, 2014

Post#11 Fallen

Every single time I read a bigger chunk of my story,my head just revolves again because more kind of totally different information comes along.Now I concluded by the continuation that Cam is acting really weird,like if he had known Luce before,he quotes "But you use to..." referring to an act Luce did,he was kind of referring to something she had done in the past and that he had seen.Cam definitely was put or entered the same school as Luce and there's something his person shares with all of the things that happen to Luce,including the shadows. I also realized how much in love Luce is with Cam everyday more,till the situation were she messed up, by accidentally asking if Cam was dating another girl to Cam's best friend.You must be really desperate to ask your crush's best friend for him.I think this totally reflects the desperation but not in a bad way but in a cute way.I am grabbing a really good sense to this story it can even change my mood sometimes and I really enjoy it.

Monday, February 3, 2014

Post # 10 Fallen

It seems to me that every time I progress my lecture in the story,things get tangled up in my head even more,because every time there is a new fact or happening that appears, it changes the whole situation.For example,it seems to be that the presence of Daniel,Luce´s mysterious crush/guy has something to do with the vanishing of the frightening shadows that follow and attack Luce everywhere she goes,What would Daniel have to do with Luce´s shadows if she had that happening even before she entered Sword & Cross Reformatory School,it seems really weird for me that Daniel could have something to do with Luce´s reasons for entering this school,but I sincerely can´t wait to find out...To testify my believe,Luce quotes in one of the vanishing-shadow moments,"It was like someone had taken a vacuum and cleared out all the grit(shadows) from the hall".This really makes me think in a diversity of solutions or predictions to my story. I kind of got sad and disappointed in another way because despite the fact that Luce had Cam,another cute pretender behind her,looking for the perfect moment to conquer her,I preferred a hundred times,Daniel.And I mean I preferred Daniel in the past because Luce discovers Daniel could be seeing someone else secretly,this is because she manages to get out of a party they were throwing and sneak on the moment Daniel i speaking to this other girl called Gabbe.I mean to say that I am kind of disappointed because even tho Daniel treats Luce in a mean and strange form,it is really romantic and mysterious.